My first position paper ever
went as pretty well as I expected: good but not great.
Strengths:
I did a good job
establishing ethos/pathos. My sources were valid and I organized my essay
fairly well.
Weaknesses:
I failed to full
analyze my quotes in depth with a "because" statement which would
have further supported my argument. My outside of class sources were also
pretty weak. I also did not site my sources correctly.
Areas of Improvement:
I got a 5 which means I,
"utilized 3 r more sources to convey a central argument, but their
analysis is limited" That's ok but lack of explanation prevented me from
getting a 7. In order to reach my goal of a 7 which is, " utilized 3 r
more sources to convey a central argument, and provides a more complete analysis
or demonstrates a more mature prose style. " I will sit down with Mrs.
Neel to discuss my writing and figure out how I can develop that more mature
style of writing.
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